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Clover Mite

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Sitting alone on the bricks,
Eight legs crouched low and close,
Eating from the chosen flower;
Yellow tufts of delicious flavor
Electrify the sense of taste.
Little bits slide backward,
Light swallows helping to move them
On a digestive journey.
Warblers nearby cause alarm,
Plucking through the flowers with their beaks,
Looking for his distinctive red hue.
Alone he sat, safely on the bricks,
Nearly sure he was safe until the human approached.
To be sure, it wasn't how he expected to die.

Copyright 11 by Th3EmOo

Written for NaPoWriMo day twenty-eight. Feedback, of course, is welcome.

Copyright 11 by Th3EmOo
© 2015 - 2024 RogueMudblood
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TeaPhotography's avatar
Oh my gosh, you must know I would love this...
I could see it all, from the "little guy's" perspective...
wonderful word usage and imagery, and despite the sad, but typically realistic ending, I liked it. :heart:

Thank you for submitting it to Unframed-Nature
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